# GSoC'22 Proposal- p5.js Examples Code Improvement

**URL:** <https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345>\
**Category:** Summer of Code\
**Created:** [April 15, 2022, 9:00am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345 "2022-04-15T09:00:12Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![rinkydevi](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/dc4da7/32.png) [@rinkydevi](https://discourse.processing.org/u/rinkydevi)\
**Post date:** [April 15, 2022, 9:00am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345/1 "2022-04-15T09:00:12Z")

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Hello mentors,  
Please have a review to my Proposal for “Examples code Improvement” and suggest your valuable feedback.  
[Link](https://docs.google.com/document/d/14WX_wwpsDhYpAUZ0X-d65qxQ_Rolnbb5j8Hl_wAjVAY/edit?usp=sharing)

Thanks  
regards  
Rinky Devi

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**Author:** ![rinkydevi](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/dc4da7/32.png) [@rinkydevi](https://discourse.processing.org/u/rinkydevi)\
**Post date:** [April 15, 2022, 12:49pm UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345/2 "2022-04-15T12:49:59Z")

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hey @yinhwa @mcintyre , can u please review my proposal and give your valuable feedback

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**Author:** ![rinkydevi](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/dc4da7/32.png) [@rinkydevi](https://discourse.processing.org/u/rinkydevi)\
**Post date:** [April 17, 2022, 11:24am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345/3 "2022-04-17T11:24:40Z")

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@SomeOne can u please review my code or suggest some mentor to do it

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**Author:** ![SomeOne](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex036/user_avatar/discourse.processing.org/someone/32/8639_2.png) [@SomeOne](https://discourse.processing.org/u/SomeOne)\
**Post date:** [April 17, 2022, 1:01pm UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345/4 "2022-04-17T13:01:20Z")

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I had a brief look at your proposal and it made me wonder have you read at what [processing is looking for GSoC’22](https://github.com/processing/processing/wiki/Project-List)?  
Anyway, I don’t know if I even can be a mentor, because I have no formal connection to processing. I’m just an occasionally active volunteer commenting on the discussion forum and artist using processing.

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**Author:** ![mcintyre](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex036/user_avatar/discourse.processing.org/mcintyre/32/14561_2.png) [@mcintyre](https://discourse.processing.org/u/mcintyre)\
**Post date:** [April 17, 2022, 3:27pm UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345/5 "2022-04-17T15:27:42Z")

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Your proposal is off to a good start! My biggest points of feedback are to 1) add visuals and 2) suggest specific improvements to the examples themselves.

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**Author:** ![rinkydevi](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/dc4da7/32.png) [@rinkydevi](https://discourse.processing.org/u/rinkydevi)\
**Post date:** [April 18, 2022, 4:56am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc22-proposal-p5-js-examples-code-improvement/36345/6 "2022-04-18T04:56:19Z")

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@mcintyre Thank you so much for reviewing my proposal, it helped me alot .  
I changed and edited the proposal accordingly, Can u please just put eyes on my changes.  
Thank you again for your help and guidance😊