# GSoC’22 Proposal Review - Beginner Documentation for py5

**URL:** <https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc-22-proposal-review-beginner-documentation-for-py5/36441>\
**Category:** Summer of Code\
**Created:** [April 19, 2022, 10:09am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc-22-proposal-review-beginner-documentation-for-py5/36441 "2022-04-19T10:09:02Z")\
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**Author:** ![lowlypalace](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/f08c70/32.png) [@lowlypalace](https://discourse.processing.org/u/lowlypalace)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2022, 10:09am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc-22-proposal-review-beginner-documentation-for-py5/36441/1 "2022-04-19T10:09:02Z")

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Hi everyone, here’s a proposal to create [Beginner Documentation for py5](https://docs.google.com/document/d/12epD733ItP4PUAU8JMnl4tvxUBrvGwv_g9B1YmhWXFw/edit?usp=sharing).

Any suggestions and feedback from the mentor and community will be super helpful and will help me to improve my proposal 😊

Tagging mentors @tabreturn and @hx2A

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**Author:** ![tabreturn](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex036/user_avatar/discourse.processing.org/tabreturn/32/3697_2.png) [@tabreturn](https://discourse.processing.org/u/tabreturn)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2022, 11:16am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc-22-proposal-review-beginner-documentation-for-py5/36441/2 "2022-04-19T11:16:39Z")

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Cutting this fine, @lowlypalace 😓. But thanks for your interest.

I’ve left some comments, but it’s unlikely I can provide any further review before the submission deadline.

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**Author:** ![hx2A](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex036/user_avatar/discourse.processing.org/hx2a/32/14322_2.png) [@hx2A](https://discourse.processing.org/u/hx2A)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2022, 11:52am UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc-22-proposal-review-beginner-documentation-for-py5/36441/3 "2022-04-19T11:52:55Z")

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@lowlypalace , thank you for your interest!

@tabreturn’s comments were quite good and I don’t have much to add. The beginning of the Project Description was a bit confusing and should probably be pared down to focus more on py5 and what you’d do here.

Please submit before the deadline…not much time left

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**Author:** ![lowlypalace](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/f08c70/32.png) [@lowlypalace](https://discourse.processing.org/u/lowlypalace)\
**Post date:** [April 19, 2022, 1:42pm UTC](https://discourse.processing.org/t/gsoc-22-proposal-review-beginner-documentation-for-py5/36441/4 "2022-04-19T13:42:38Z")

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Thanks a lot for your feedback @tabreturn and @hx2A. Appreciate that you were able to provide me with some ideas on how to improve before the deadline! 😊